Monday

ENG 103 Final Draft Planning . .

I have received my research paper draft and after reading Pro.Dragan's comments I will like improve on a couple of things. The places that I would like to improve on is getting two miscellaneous videos on cloning. I will be looking at videos on youtube. I will also be using a course pack reading to help me as well. I also need to make a stronger connect to my sources and thesis statement. I also need a book review from "LexisNexis". This draft really help me see that I need to improve on my research paper. Also, I need a few more pages on my topic.    

3 comments:

  1. I am doing cloning too! and i think that i need to add youtube videos too. Its going to be tough to find a good video though.. if anything ive seen a documentary from discovery channel

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  2. Good original topic!
    I also had problems finding a review, if you cant find one on LexisNexis try a good source like New York Times. Don't forget to extend your writing so that its long enough and paraphrase!

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  3. The problem with finding a book review of _Never Let Me Go_ is there are TOO many hits on LexisNexis. Melinda's idea for the New York Times is good. In Google, search for these exact terms: "site:www.nytimes.com never let me go book review ishiguro" and you should find something.

    Hope this helps! --Prof. Dragan

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